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my friend the drunk by ~meg444:iconmeg444:



so you say im a loser

and maybe your right

but your a boozer

who isnt that bright

so tell me im a idiot to stop you from drinking

tell me im crazy to stop you from sinking

because im thinking

of what your life will be after that bottle of beer

but you wont listen to reson you cant hear

you are my friend a compainion scince i was 3

but your to drunk to even see

im telling you now stop when you can

unless this is your lifes big plan

im giving up right noe but before i go

give me your car keys so i know

that you wont dead in the street

with a ranover kid at your feet
©2007-2009 ~meg444
:iconmeg444:

Author's Comments

yah this story is in no way related to my personal life its just a poem i wrote a couple of weeks ago. so uh yah please reply. XD


~meg444

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Hi! Even though I already commented on the HMSWC Forum, It's stilll a good poem! And I will post my previous comment:

Wow.. that's good! Not exactly dark, but kind of sad... It describes it really well!

Seeya round!

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